This is not a story of two teenagers from
different faiths falling in love and eloping; this is not a story of a
middle-aged chronic bachelor and a confirmed spinster falling for each other;
it is not the story of a widower and a widow in their old age getting together
for companionship. It is
the story of an estranged couple, who have rediscovered their relationship.
The lady in reference now in her
mid-sixties lost her father when she was very young. Her mother raised this
lady and her four or five siblings with great difficulty. This lady completed college and
managed to get a government job. Since
her siblings did not complete their studies and didn’t have any permanent jobs,
the responsibility of running the household fell on her shoulders. She was determined to remain single to
take care of the family, but her ailing mother coerced her into marrying a
relative, who like her brothers, was unemployed, hoping that he would not
restrict her from supporting her family. Post marriage, her burdens increased
and unable to manage two homes, she moved back to her maternal home after a few
months. Her husband could
not adjust with her people and demanded that they move out. She did not yield and one day, in her
absence, her husband and her brothers had a fight over a trivial issue and her
husband left home. Her
pleading and efforts of friends and relatives to bring him back failed. Years passed. The lady continued to live with her
enmeshed family and her responsibilities multiplied.
Good plot, plainly narrated, human emotions are very complex and enabling someone else feel those emotions through words is indeed a laudable task. If it is you who conceived this story plot, do you want to paint husband as selfish and egoistic? In some aspects narration is incomplete. You have flair for writing, distinguish emotions of your main character layer by layer as if you are peeling thin layer of onion.
ReplyDeleteThanks for patient reading and the comments Atul Sir. The basic content is certainly not fictional. It is really sad that such creatures exist. The lady is also to be blamed for not being assertive, both with her siblings and also with her husband, but I deliberately did not want to include my judgments in the story. But as you rightly said, human emotions are complex.
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